Wednesday, 25 March 2020

No Cliches Lucy Harrison


WFW 25/03/2020   No clichés by Lucy Harrison

‘Come in,’
Emily pushed the door open.  The late afternoon sun shone weakly through the window behind the plain office desk.  She could make out a grey middle aged woman with a large muslin cap.   A stiff white collar held her chin up – there was no resting in this uniform. 
‘Name?’ she asked, hardly looking up from the pile of papers in front of her.
‘Emily Carew, Ma’am’
‘Matron.  Age?’
‘Twenty, Matron,
Matron nodded, and added Emily’s name and age to a list.
‘Experience?’
‘Very little, Matron.  I lived in Russia in 05, during the uprising.  I helped Mamulya care for some of the injured people.  But I am willing to learn.’
‘You are Russian?’
‘No, Matron, English.  I was born in India and schooled in Paris, then when Papa died..’
‘I don’t need your life story.  I want to know that you are willing to work hard, and won’t faint at the sight of blood’
Emily paused.  Was that a question?  Was ‘yes’ or ‘no’ the right answer?’
‘You will report to Lark ward tomorrow morning at six.  Sister Bradshaw will meet you, give you your uniform and tell you your duties.  Goodbye, Nurse Crewe’
Carew, thought Emily.  Carew.  Will nobody get it right?

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For those that don’t know, I’m writing, (somewhat intermittently) a story based on Emily Carew.  Emily is a side character in ‘A Little Princess’ by Frances Hodgson Burnett.  The ‘little princess’, Sara Crewe, is sent from India to school in London by her rich father.  Father dies, and the fortune is thought to be lost.  She becomes a servant in the school she was at.  Meanwhile, her father’s friend Carrisford, has recovered the fortune and is trying to find her. He sends his lawyer, Carmichael, (I wish Burnett had moved through the alphabet a little in her names) to search for the missing girl, but he doesn’t know her first name.  Carmichael tracks down an Emily Carew in a school in France, whose father has died.  He thinks that this may be a misspelling of Crewe.  However, when he gets to the school, he finds that she has been adopted by a Russian couple.  So he then tracks her down and finds she is the wrong person.    So I’ve been trying to piece together what her story would have been around the turn of the twentieth century.

Lucy Harrison



2 comments:

  1. This was great, Lucy. You caught the atmosthper of the matron perfectly. Someone you certainly don't want to mess with. I want to read more....

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  2. At some point I need to collect all the little bits together and string them into one narrative and see if they make sense

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